The bar chart below shows the anount of money invested in five categories in different organizations.
The bar chart illustrates the different ways of five companies invest in machinery, building, staff training, and research.
Overall, organization B has the largest investment while the amount of money two companies D and E fund for the categories are less than others. Besides, the organization C has the most different investment pattern in all.
Looking at the chart in more details, most categories are allocated above $1 billion in organization A and B. The largest investment of organization A goes to building, which is around $1.5 billion; followed by $1.2 billion is allocated for staff training. However, organization B spend over $1.8 billion on employee training, which is the largest investment of all categories. $1.6 billion is the amount of money investing research which is much higher than that of organization A ($1.2 billion). Besides, machinery is allocated the least money in both organizations.
Organizations D and E have the same pattern in investment with the same amount at money allocating for building ($1 billion) and study is the least invested category. However, in organization C, research and machinery are both invested at $1.2 billion while the least invested categories are building and staff training ($1 billion and $0.8 billion respectively).
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ils, most categories are allocated above billion in organization A and B. The lar...
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... The largest investment of organization A goes to building, which is around .5 billion...
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... amount at money allocating for building billion and study is the least invested ...
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...tegories are building and staff training billion and sh.8 billion respectively.
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Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...gories are building and staff training billion and sh.8 billion respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, look, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3567839196 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16029667338 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467336683417 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 321.3 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.774128314 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30370814208 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149248477668 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585346457195 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223462774986 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440097079192 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.