The percentage of overweightchildren in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last 10 years. Discuss the cause and effect of this.
In the so -called digital world, physical activity of children and young people is very much less but the consumption of high calorie food has gone up. During the last ten years there has occured a 20% increase in the case of overweight children in the European countries. It would be a great benefit to us, if we analyse the causes of this negative development and to attend ill effects on over consumption.
one of the major causes of the increased body mass index is a consumption of fast food. Today parents are mostly employed and quite often they have not time to cook food in their own home, so they bring junk food from the market. the influence that highly tempting advertisements of food exerts on children is to be counted as adding to the problem. in the advertisements they give fake information about the nutritive value and the flavours such foods offer. The delicious snacks and cusinines are prepared by adding various artificial test giving substances. Most fascinated by the advertisements to taste junk food. For another matter, most children of today spend their time in front of the TV or play video games. Due to this habit the fat and carbohydrate taken through fast food remain in the body and cause overweight.
This type of habit adversely affect the health of all and specially of children who don't get involved in at least a moderate level of physical activity and yet make a lit of intake, if fast food will soon contract to certain diseases such as heart problems, hypertension, diabetes and the like even in their early years. Their obese physical nature, not only affects their health, it negatively impacts their psychological well being as well. Ise student is too fat, the other students may tease him or her in front of others and in some cases nicknames are appended also. this will lead to low self esteem and depression in some children.
Obesity is something quite controllable, if adequate physical activities taken up and the intake of fast food is done away with. There is no doubt that any normal person can lead a disease free and healthy life, if some precautions are taken and good habits formulated.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76943699732 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62862583036 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603217158177 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.864475999 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.647058824 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9411764706 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0877314831861 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318063242767 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528694788634 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582620559735 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627022351984 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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