Many students around the world are not choosing science subjects at University, given reasons for that and what are impact on the community.
An increasing concern for many individuals around the world are not choosing science subjects in tertiary education. Because, the last few decades have seen enormous changes in the way people's lives are affected by the advancement in technological fields such as computer and internet. So That's why, people do all focus on computer fields. This essay will outline the reasons why this trend is occurring, and discuss the results it can have on community.
Generally speaking, perhaps the most compelling reason why people are not studying science subjects is because In the Era of modernization most individuals wants to study in business, Microsoft, and fashion fields. This means that if they study these subjects, they would get a better job with out feeling any challenges. For example, A recent research conducted by the Harvard University, 25% of international students who got a job in Microsoft fields after completed their education. A further point in favour of this idea could be that science is more expensive field than others. Only rich people can afford it. A good illustration might be that If any body who have less budget, they can not become a doctor.
On the flip side, there are various impacts on human community. Firstly, Masses could not know about flora and fauna. If people eat chemical fertilizer crops, they will will ill immediately. As a result, Many illnesses would grow in their healthy body, like as lung cancer, Bronchitis and Aztama, which in turn leads to personal problems depression and alcoholism. The decision as to whether we should eat healthy foods after cleaning process must be seen in the context of the entire society.
To sum up, In today's globalized, urbanised and the over-populated world this is a topic which is very relevant to contemporary society. One way to solve this issue could be that government should provide better employment in science fields. Unless people adopt science subjects, our future generations will not get healthy and luxurious lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, as to, for example, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17629179331 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75416840325 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61094224924 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4597263535 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6111111111 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2777777778 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145083339598 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417498717713 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760981442091 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832508573873 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470905629909 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.