Zoos are sometimes seen as necessary but not poor alternatives to natural environment. Discuss some arguments for and /or against keeping animals in zoo.
What if someone is locked in the room, everyday?. The room is very isolated. Moreover, he cannot go everywhere and anywhere. Of course, this can make him crazy or stressful. It also happens in animals. They are alive too. In Surabaya, Indonesia, many animals dead one by one. Carryout from the research of The Indonesian Zoo Department , mostly, this is because, the animals live in small cage. Usually, the cage is filled by two animals and the floor is made by concrete. This means, that there are few animals in the same place and live in unnatural environment. This can make those become depresse...
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Sentence: In Surabaya, Indonesia, many animals dead one by one.
Description: The fragment animals dead one is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace dead with adverb
rare species will be save.
rare species will be saved.
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