The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second charts shows the greenhouse gas emmisions which results from this energy uses.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makes comparisons where relevant.
The supplied bar charts indicate the average energy consumptions of six gernes of households purposes: heating, cooling, lighting, waterheating, refrigeration, and other appliances; and the amount of greenhouse gas which are leased from mentioned uses.
In conclusion, heating requires the highest amount of energy amongst all. What's more, waterheating has the greatest influence on CO2 emmisions, while cooling has the slightest impact due to its mere minority of power consumption.
To begin with, heating needs more energy than the rest with 42% and 15% for green house gas emmisions. In addition, even though water heating comes next in household energy use (30%), it takes the first place in the release of CO2 from household use.
According to the give figure, cooling has the lowest proportion in both pie charts with 2% of energy consumption and 3% of influence on greenhouse. Moreover, while other appliances consume 15% power, the amount of pollutant they release is nearly twice higher (28%)
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- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household The second charts shows the greenhouse gas emmisions which results from this energy uses Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and makes com 89
- Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology Discuss both views and give 64
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, while, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37974683544 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81880857487 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677215189873 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6300139402 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.428571429 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211722175063 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087893684472 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077451888391 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118799005907 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705495603163 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.