today,the life expectancy of people is much higher than before
Some people think that older people should continue to be involved in the workforce .to what extent do u agree or disagree
Some people believe that the present of senior citizens should continue at workplace Instead of retirement due to rising average life expectancy. this essay disagree with this argument because decreasing capability of older people to handle challenging work situations and in addition less job vacancies for today's youngsters.
The main reason why old aged people should retired from the workplace is that senior citizens are unable to cooperate with difficult situations at workplace owing to declining health status day by day. Nowadays, every individual need to stay active in order to make a reputation at workplace in this world of competition. In developed countries especially in america, they retired their older citizens at the age of 60. Since they aware about ability of not doing work in a given period of time unless it would be deprived them from achieving success.
Another contributing factor is already less job opportunities for youngsters due to explosion of population. If old people remain at work place after their limit of age . it would definitely increase the issue of unemployment among individuals.A recent survey conducted by the times of america which revealed that about 50% unemployment rate has increased due to allowing old people to work at job places ,which decreased opportunities for adults.that'swhy older people retirement is necessary to provide opportunities to youngsters.
In conclusion, the old citizens allow to work after the age of retirement is not an appropriate for the workplace in terms of dropping health and less opportunities for adults
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.388 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03840697631 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.7032400858 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.7 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164978722456 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686881061337 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625463975622 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105370396422 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841554774732 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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