The most important thing the government should do to improve health care is to clean the environment.
Health problem attracts a growing number of attention in the world. Diseases, even cancers involve around us constantly. Health problem is the enormous challenge for us which urgently needs to be solved. The government makes efforts to offer service and treatment for citizens recently. Some people think the most important thing the government should do to improve health care is to clean the environment. However, from my perspective, I disagree with the statement.
Admittedly, cleaning the environment by government is important to improve health care sometimes. To be more concrete, air pollution, water pollution is getting worse in the world due to the vehicle exhaust emissions, the polluted-air and polluted water discharged by factories, combustion of the trash and so on. As the management administration, cleaning environment by force can be greatly effective to some extent such as shut down the factories that discharge the polluted air and banning the cars in the streets according to the plate number in alternate days. Through improving air quality and water which we contact with every day, health care can also be improved.
However, perfecting the medical facilities is more of importance than improving the health care for government sometimes. To be more specific, equipment of the hospital decide treatment’s quality. More high-quality and advancing equipment can save and heal more patients and more difficult and severe diseases. For example, my grandpa was diagnosed as the lung disease by the X-rays 3 years ago which might develop into a cancer if we delay the treatment. And my grandpa is still alive normally now thanks to the remarkable medical equipment. If we did not have the equipment with high technological skill, the result can be very awesome to us. This kind of benefit which can diagnose and cut off the deterioration of the diseases is cleaning the environment does not have. So, perfecting the medical equipment can be more of significance than improving the health care.
Furthermore, evoking the health awareness of citizens is more crucial than cleaning the environment sometimes for government. This is because, cleaning the environment is the extrinsic method, but arousing the health awareness of citizens is the intrinsic approach which is fundamental. If people have a grasp of the value of health from the bottom of heart, they will avoid doing things which is bad for health actively. And they will do anything to stay or prompt their health in their subconscious such as jogging and sticking to a low-fat diet. By contrast, if people do not have the awareness, they will continue to eat many high-calorie food like ice-creams or hamburgers and stay up late to harm their health, even if clean the environment.
In conclusion, although cleaning the environment is important, perfecting the medical infrastructure and arousing the health awareness of the citizens is more of significance sometimes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 8.0752688172 384% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2496.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 471.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29936305732 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99570782157 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492569002123 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 759.6 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1157752153 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380918308277 0.236089414692 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118518828909 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165831676538 0.0737576698707 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209354314825 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079114196747 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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