You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course.
Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter,
describe the situation
explain why you cannot continue at this time
say what action you would like to take
I am John, dweller of Huston Street U.S.A,penning down this epistle to inform you that it would be impossible for me to continue your evening GST course .My employer has taken a decision to transfer my at an offshore venture for higher training therefore it would not be pragmatically possible for me to attend your classes.
As my company is pioneer in its field , thus in order to equip their personnel with latest techniques they arrange our apprenticeship. During this internship,I have to stay at a designated place for at least six month and I Cannot postpone it as it is the instruction of top management.
It would be highly appreciable if you return my fees after making suitable deduction from it or you can adjust it with next intake which would be in the month of December.I am quite dishearten to leave you classes in amid as these are enhancing the horizon of my knowledge.
I am anticipating a prompt and positive response from your side at your earlier convenience.
Yours faithfully
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 41, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...I am John, dweller of Huston Street U.S.A,penning down this epistle to inform you...
^
Line 2, column 42, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , penning
... am John, dweller of Huston Street U.S.A,penning down this epistle to inform you that it...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 153, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...r me to continue your evening GST course .My employer has taken a decision to tran...
^^
Line 2, column 155, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: My
...me to continue your evening GST course .My employer has taken a decision to transf...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sible for me to attend your classes. As my company is pioneer in its field , ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... As my company is pioneer in its field , thus in order to equip their personnel ...
^^
Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
... thus in order to equip their personnel with latest techniques they arrange our apprentices...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...r apprenticeship. During this internship,I have to stay at a designated place for ...
^^
Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
... at a designated place for at least six month and I Cannot postpone it as it is the i...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 38, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... It would be highly appreciable if you return my fees after making suitable ded...
^^
Line 8, column 105, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng suitable deduction from it or you can adjust it with next intake which would b...
^^
Line 8, column 174, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...which would be in the month of December.I am quite dishearten to leave you classe...
^
Line 8, column 185, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disheartened'.
Suggestion: disheartened
... be in the month of December.I am quite dishearten to leave you classes in amid as these a...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, thus, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90804597701 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94645549771 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683908045977 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.52562753 44.8134815571 231% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.333333333 76.5299724578 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 16.8248392259 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215218841323 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916671931521 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535662959615 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113032711553 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447362257879 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 8.37731958763 193% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.