You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized that you had left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
thanks to the friend for the holiday
explain that you left your wallet in their house
give instructions on how to send it back to you
Dear Samantha,
I hope you're doing great. I am writing this letter to let you know that I've forgotten my purse at your place, which is very dear to me.
Firstly, I would like to express my gratitude for giving me warmth and love during the week-long holiday with you. We've enjoyed ourselves a lot at home and on the trip to the theme park at your locality. All the memories of vacation are still reminiscent of my mind.
Secondly, I left my precious wallet at your home, which contains some plastic money and my driving license. As I have had enough money to spend for the whole week, I must not consider to put it into my bag. I vividly remember that I have kept it in the lower drawer of your main closet. I realized everything when I needed to scan the driving license for my coming exam of transportation services.
Finally, as you know that this purse is not only a necessity for me but also given by my father, it would be appreciated if you could send it back to me by post as soon as possible. You can even send it to my official address, which is attached herewith.
Please let me know if you require any further information.
Best regards,
Kate
- Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television However television cannot replace the book as a learning tool which is why children are less well educated today To what extent do you agree with the statement 89
- Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times even on holidays Does this development have more advantages than disadvantages 63
- Shopping has become a new favorite pastime for the young generation Why this is the case Should they encourage to develop other hobbies too 97
- You are not satisfied with your recent trip Write a letter to the travel agency In your letter Where and when you went on holiday What has happened What do you want from the organization 74
- Some schools have restricted the use of mobile phones Is this a positive development or a negative development 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Samantha, I hope youre doing great. I am writing t...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Samantha, I hope youre doing great. I am writing this letter t...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...riting this letter to let you know that Ive forgotten my purse at your place, which...
^^^
Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: We've
... during the week-long holiday with you. Weve enjoyed ourselves a lot at home and on ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider putting'.
Suggestion: consider putting
...to spend for the whole week, I must not consider to put it into my bag. I vividly remember that...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ny further information. Best regards, Kate
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42396313364 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45242701565 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63133640553 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4144326921 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8461538462 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301577706914 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957002377471 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568394207174 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164343691909 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410110843331 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.