You are looking for a job and you’ve seen an advertisement of a contractor who
needs a construction engineer (or a structural engineer, a material engineer, an
infrastructural engineer) at the site-manager post. Write a covering letter to a potential
employer to accompany your CV. The email should include:
1. An introduction: introduce yourself and say where you saw the job advert.
2. A summary of your qualifications.
3. A summary of your experience in the construction industry.
From: Tran Ngoc Hung
To: HR manager
Subject: Application letter for construction engineer position with reference to advertisement on the Careerlink.vn website on apirl 17, 2020.
Dear Sir,
I am writing in response to your advertisement on the Careerlink.vn website for construction engineer position
I graduated from University of Transport and Communications with a degree in Civil Engineering
I have worked for ABC company as a material engineer for 5 years. My main qualification are
- Developing, modifying, testing and evaluating materials.
- Providing technical advice about the suitability of materials.
- Diagnosing faults.
- Supervising engineering and technical staffs.
- Liaising with customers, suppliers and manufacturing staffs.
I belive I have the right experience and qualifications for this job. I have enclosed a copy of my C.V and university degree and experience certificates for your review.
Thank you for taking time to consider my application and I am available for contact and interview at any time.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely,
Tran Ngoc Hung
999 Lac Long Quan Street
Phone: 0888888888
Email: Hung@gmail.com
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... you soon. Sincerely, Tran Ngoc Hung 999 Lac Long Quan Street Phone: 0888888...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 10.5418719212 9% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 173.0 242.827586207 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.99421965318 5.00649968141 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.92707691288 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50801200306 2.71678728327 129% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 139.433497537 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64161849711 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 379.143842365 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 69.9993551558 50.4703680194 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2727272727 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 7.25397266985 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.12807881773 363% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25720715766 0.242375264174 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751728072143 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088227746497 0.071462118173 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738797015488 0.151781067708 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795431368338 0.0609392437508 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.17 11.5310837438 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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