"After high school, a choice that many students have to make is whether to go to college and university or not. The decision that will give people the better opportunity to have a more successful life is to go to college and university. In most people's opinions, obtaining a university degree is the best way to get success in life."
"Write an essay to an educated reader to give your opinion about this trend. Include reasons and relevant examples to support your answer.
You should write at least 250 words Your response will be evaluated in terms of Task Fulfillment, Organization, Vocabulary and Grammar"
University degree is a critical component of human development worldwide. Some people believe that having a university degree is the best way to get success, others think that students should gain practical experience through job after high school instead of getting a university degree. From my point of view, both of them have their own right views.
It is certainly true that one of the main aims of university education is to get the best success for students. First of all, University graduates gain professional qualifications that are recognized and respected worldwide. This is prospect chance for students to get higher pay, and greater financial stability of their future job. Additionally, It promotes critical thinkings in some complicated fields. In mordern technology, Critical thinking is vital for success, and refers to the skills which enable people to think effectively. Then, it leads to a good team or ingenious leader.
However, In contrast to this stance, many young students want to start earning money as soon as possible. In this way, they become independent and prefer their own source of income rather than relying on parents. Furthermore, students realize the gateway to advanced opportunities by getting a job after high school. It takes them to the maturity, and many real experiences from the most basic things which leads to success. Finally, the rising number of university graduates cause more harm than good, they just pursue the university degree while their future desire does not require qualifications as well as in-depth knowledge. This is understandable why many people do not agree with obtaining university degree.
Having a degree improves the chances of getting successful life, It is not the only way to success, but it is certainly the shortest way to pursue it. Even though not choosing to attend college, students still succeed. Therefore, it completely depends on the persistence, patience and competence of a person instead of a relevant degree.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, in contrast, as well as, first of all, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29153605016 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87919387549 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573667711599 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.728145811 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7777777778 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7222222222 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244248898274 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674280830491 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061080639829 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149589599044 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620994732063 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.