MY DREAM
Hello, everyone! Today I will tell about my dream. It is to become a civil engineer. I want to build a big house for my parents because my family has to live in an old house.
Ever since I was a child, I was fascinated with the buildings that I saw on television through the Doraemon cartoon. Those are classic Japanese style houses.
To fulfill my dreams, I have always tried to study from an early age. Now, I am studying in the third year of Civil Engineering major at Can Tho University. In the university lecture hall, I was taught a lot of construction and architecture knowledge by teachers. That is the knowledge that helped me achieve my dream.
I like working in Japan because this is a country with a very developed construction industry. Some skills I need for my job are like communication, team work, organization, time management.
Hope I will fulfill my dream in the near future and I will build a big house for my parents.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-09-20 | K4rame1 | view | |
| 2020-04-26 | Nguyễn Thành Chung | 56 | view |
| 2020-04-23 | PHAN ĐOÀN PHƯƠNG MAI | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, third, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 171.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56725146199 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83527444235 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637426900585 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.903667694 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.0833333333 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 7.06120827912 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397380198548 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139715724668 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167614674132 0.0667982634062 251% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217454695095 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158359593941 0.056905535591 278% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 13.0946893788 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.