Nowadays environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual persons. In other words, it is a governmental problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Since the number of people on Earth has increased, the amount of issues with environment has grown. In our time troubles with surrounding environment are enormously huge to be solved by a single person, in other words it is a problem of authorities. I totally agree with the opinion that it is a governmental responsibility and believe that world leaders have to commence issuing fines and also encourage people who treat nature badly.
Firstly, the elected officials should provide large fines to individuals who pollute environment. In other words, these penalties must be absolutely huge due to the fact that if a single person made a mistake, they immediately correct themselves. Likewise, all the humans will constantly think regarding these fines and they will not let themselves to litter on the streets. For example, in China if you throw something on the street, CCTV cameras will identify it and you will obtain enormous fine for that mistake. Thus, every government ought to construct huge fines to people who are littering on the streets.
Secondly, authorities should make separated trash bins. Therefore, when someone who is discarding trash puts his waste in the correct bin he or she will feel the satisfaction about their move. For instance, in United Kingdom when somebody has thrown their rubbish in the correct bin, obtains two pounds. Hence, it is a perfect way to stimulate people to eliminate their trash not on the streets, but also in a correct container.
To conclude, I strongly agree with the statement that authorities should provide special fines and encourage people to opt for ecology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, likewise, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12406015038 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76636814181 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593984962406 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0982409746 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.846153846 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111541309394 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373064869088 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05546537947 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.061383721976 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519823700182 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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