Some people say you don’t need much money to be happy. What do you think
There have been different views about whether people will be happier without money or not. From my perspective, I totally decline to the statement that money will affect how satisfied our lives are.
It is an apparent fact that there is a multitude of reasons why money plays a crucial role in human survival. In the first place, money is in charge of almost aspects such as accommodation, transportation expenses, tuition fees and the most important is food and drink. In other words, without money, we are not capable to pay for all these bills or probably, live with debts.
Furthermore, owing a large chunk of money, no doubt, gives us a good chance to become the owner of the most electricity items. For example, we find it easy to purchase a novel smartphone or a compact camera without being wasted an amount of time thinking because of its high price.
Finally, money is able to reduce the stress rate. Due to its power, people are easy to get their favorite tools, travel to their dream destinations, afford modern houses, and even support finial for those who have troubled life with a limited budget. Living a life with money shows us how perfect it is when money is willing to fulfill all the wishes.
Taking everything into consideration, I still maintain my opinion that life is getting harder and harder without money which is taken into account as the necessary item in this day and age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, so, still, for example, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, in other words, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1164.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73170731707 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52509383646 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654471544715 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9250740648 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.818181818 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3636363636 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119444923246 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472606240529 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0260511659683 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0640852478054 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242242183086 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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