MY HOLIDAY TRIP
Hello, everyone! Today I will tell you about my holiday trip. Last summer, I and my friends went to Vung Tau by motorbike. We have two interesting days in Vung Tau city. We started my trip at 3 am. After 6 hours, we arrived at Long Thanh stop. We stopped there for 15 minutes and drank fresh cow's milk. After that we continue the trip to Vung Tau city. After another hour, we arrived. The hotel we stayed in was a nice little hotel, from the hotel we could see the beach and it had a good view. We spent 2 hours drinking coffee then we went to the beach to swim. In the evening, we go to Karaoke together. The next morning we walked along the beach watching the sunrise. After that we went to the cafe and chatted together. At 8am we have breakfast then we return to Can Tho city. We arrived in Can Tho at 4 pm. We said goodbye and ended an enjoyable 2 days in Vung Tau.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-05-01 | Nguyễn Thành Chung | 56 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 304, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r 15 minutes and drank fresh cows milk. After that we continue the trip to Vung Tau c...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 698.0 1615.20841683 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 173.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.03468208092 5.12529762239 79% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09567667761 2.80592935109 75% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 176.041082164 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589595375723 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 506.74238477 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.60771543086 75% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.6445995867 49.4020404114 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 43.625 106.682146367 41% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.8125 20.7667163134 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.25 7.06120827912 4% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129034498481 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614439112805 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124709396595 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129034498481 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.0 13.0946893788 23% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 95.17 50.2224549098 189% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 2.5 11.3001002004 22% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.91 12.4159519038 40% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.14 8.58950901804 71% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 78.4519038076 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 5.0 10.7795591182 46% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.