Despite the environmental concerns raised by scientists, people are not changing their lifestyle. Why is this the case? What could be done to encourage the people to save the environment?
It is irrefutable fact that surrondings are the part of nature. Helpful environment is room for the life of mankind. Nowadays, some of the major which lead to harm nature due to human activities. Although, scientists are awaring about environmental concerns, yet people do not want to change life span. I shall shed a light on points related to this issue in subsequent paragraphs.
the first and foremost point which stribes that is lack of awareness. this is the major reason that people are not changing their life towards environment. Ordinary people are cutting down the trees to fulfil their needs such as woods for furniture and more land to construct buildings. Adding to this, due to illiteracy, people do not know that if there would be no nature then life is not possible or difficult to survive. Furthermore, individuals are creating pollution which is the grave concerene of environment. Thus, their are the reasons that people still have not changing towards nature.
Turning towards the aspect which can encourage the people about the environmental issues. Firstly, some events should be held in which people come to know about great advantages related to environment. People should acknowledge about natural things for example, individuals should use biogas for household chores and ecofriendly vehicles to commute distances. Secondly, good education should provide to children because they can aware the society to make environment neat and clean.
Thirdly, local bodies should make rules related to environment that if anyone cut down the tree or pollute the surroundings, he should be fined and put after bars. Last but not least, being citizens of country also good human beings, people should pay attention to control the beauty of nature to make a decline in environmental concerns. As a result, above these are the points which can encourage people to make environment clean.
In conclusion, having healthy and clean environment, life could be better and easy to live. People should plant more and more trees and give time to the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly, thus, as for, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20298507463 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74156963332 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546268656716 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8663180756 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.15 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282546461486 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922272610841 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708447355202 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16514906993 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412232390171 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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