Write two or three paragraphs about a best friend of yours
Linh is my best friend, and she is the one I admire. We have met each other for a long time, precisely when we were like ten years old. We both come from Ca Mau Province. She is now studying at Can Tho University. My best friend has a graceful elegant beauty in natural, and well-proportioned body. She looks so perfect with her heart-shaped face and her beady eyes. She can paint a ray of sunshine all over her face with her smile. We have a lot of things in common, such as we like reading books, listening to music, and playing games in free time.
My friend is often said to be a kind, generous and estimable girl. She always tries to get on well with people around her and be willing to help everyone when they are in difficulties. One of the reasons why I admire her is her carefulness. Before my friend makes a decision, she always tends to collect all the information, then she depends on and notices the information having get. Furthermore, she works not only carefully but also effectively, so I think it is believable that she be able to do anything perfectly as she can. To my eye, she is not only a friend but also a member of my family. When I am under a lot of pressure, make a mistake, or have difficulty solving problems; she always listens, supports, and gives me useful advice. When I need a person to rely on, she always stands by me and be willing to be my shoulder to cry on. It is important that we need friends to maintain, and make our lives colorful. No matter how far we can go together, I just want to say:“ Dear my best friend, I don’t know how to thank you, but I feel like being lucky to have you in my life. You are the apple of my eye!”
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... my life. You are the apple of my eye!”
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, then, well, i feel, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 5.60731707317 999% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 965.302439024 140% => OK
No of words: 323.0 196.424390244 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19814241486 4.92477711251 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53694343843 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 106.607317073 174% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572755417957 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 283.868780488 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 1.53170731707 1175% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.482926829268 1449% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 8.94146341463 212% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8236416928 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3684210526 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.89473684211 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 3.70975609756 350% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0705934738589 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0302835067673 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462063630911 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.061083803101 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00240907247533 0.0819641961636 3% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.2329268293 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 11.4140731707 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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