Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security. others think that people can not expect to enjoy a job and that having a permanent job is more important.
discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Time is altering and so is the general view on pleasurable working situation. Although concentrating on the significance of labor contentment is postulated by some individuals, others are in a favor of taking profession safety into account. Throughout the following paragraphs, this essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and provide evidence as to why career delight is superior.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that, security is one of the most effective factors among others which should not be ignored. The reason behind that is, when employers totally convince about their job security, they will not suffer from tremendous pressure from income and they will capable of leading as various lifestyles as they look for. For instance, according to Guardian site, 80 percent of Apple company employers are certain about their job safety so that they always make the company’s condition ameliorated. Therefore, job security plays a crucial role in people’s lives.
On the other hand, without any shadow of doubt, having only one desire for occupation such as security is totally insufficient for both employers and companies as human beings require possessing variety lifestyles to live happily ever after. Therefore, if workers just care about security and ignore satisfaction, they will soon become burn out and leave the profession. A clear example is that, according to Iran’s job vacancy site, had companies hired enthusiastic employers rather than hard working ones, Iran now would not suffer from bankrupt economy so job satisfaction should not be staying in dark side.
To sum up, after careful situational analysis, although viewing on of the factors of job satisfaction or job security more significant than another is deemed to be stringently superficial as some individuals are in favor of security and others against, in my opinion satisfaction takes the lead and it is superior.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore, thus, as to, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32786885246 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88679913483 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603278688525 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.8383170853 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.727272727 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7272727273 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251122599005 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893565935605 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857918659725 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155832472485 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077782935287 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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