Not enough students around the world choose to study science subjects at university. What are the reasons for this? What impact does this issue have on society?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
The latest statistics have shown that in the contemporary world number of students who choose to study science subjects at the tertiary level is below the required level. This is happening because of the high cost of scientific studies, and a great deal of diligence require to study these subjects. This situation has significant consequences on contemporary society, such as insufficient doctors, researchers, and IT professionals.
One of the main reasons behind pupils to drop the idea of pursuing degrees in the science field at the university level is that the fee for these subjects is not budget-friendly. As a consequence, aspirants opt to study less costly courses rather than dropping them out of studies. Further, not every institute offers a scholarship that could fully compensate for study expenses. In other words, only those students can afford such studies whose family can readily bear the study budget.
Another cause of this is the diligence required to study such hard subjects. In other words, science subjects require a great deal of commitment and dedicated hard work, which cannot be expected from everyone. Doctors, researchers, and IT professionals have to study day and night to get higher grades and admission in renowned institutes, for instance. Therefore, pupils who are aware of this situation opt to choose subjects which are easy and do not demand extra effort.
This has led to some significant effects, insufficient doctors, researchers, and IT professionals particularly. Although there are many people in the field of science, the recent pandemic of COVID-19 to which approximately 4 lakh of people globally succumbed to death, the number of doctors and researchers is significantly low. Further, the world has witnessed the significance of IT professionals to intact the global economy online in such outbreaks. Hence, contemporary society needs more people to study science so that unpredictable situations can be catered.
In conclusion, high budgeted scientific studies, and a great deal of hard work to study these subjects are a few of many reasons for the increasing number of students who opt not to study science subjects. Consequently, this situation is leading contemporary society to the scarcity of human resources in the science field.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'studying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: studying
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'lakh' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'lakhs'.
Suggestion: lakhs
...ic of COVID-19 to which approximately 4 lakh of people globally succumbed to death, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38227146814 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08248146401 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495844875346 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9993921207 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.294117647 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2352941176 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230353456998 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752539577671 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446531808963 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140401251538 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044723795137 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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