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Which way is the best for students to make new friends: joining a sport team, participating in community activities, or travelling?
People become quite divided when they try to figure out the best way to make new friends. If you are a community volunteer, you may find community activity is the best choice. But if you are a travel fan, you may be convinced that nothing could be better than travelling. However, as a huge fan of basketball, I always regard joining a sport team as the best way to make new friends. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.
First of all, compared to the community activities and travelling, sport team offers much longer time for you to be with your new friends so that you could know t...
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Sentence: If you are a community volunteer, you may find community activity is the best choice.
Description: The fragment a community volunteer is not usually preceded by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
Sentence: But if you are a travel fan, you may be convinced that nothing could be better than travelling.
Description: The fragment a travel fan is not usually preceded by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
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