In many developed countries, the government has to pay for old people's healthcare services.
Who do you think should pay, the government or the family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Health care is considered one of the most imperative factors to human beings, especially for the elderly. Therefore, in some countries, the government is responsible for taking care of the aged. However, whether the government or the family should pay for senior citizens has created heated debate. My view is that old people can depend on the government in terms of health care service.
Firstly, it is clear that every citizen has to pay monthly income tax during the time of working, which will enable them to deal with medical treatment without support from the family when they are not unable to earn money anymore. Besides, with that amount of revenue, the government can manage to help the poor or those who do not have jobs and family
Moreover, helping old people to deal with medical treatment will make a contribution to balance society. It is the fact that people with adequate services and conditions easily recover from their problems. On the other hand, those who do not have family to look after, to provide necessary conditions, or to encourage them find it difficult to overcome their sickness. So with help from the government, every old individual has the best treatment so that they can get over their sickness as soon as they can
Although some people may argue that paying medical care for the old may bring about a burden for the government, human health and life should run as the first priority.
In sum, not all citizens have sufficient care when they get older, so in order to balance spending on health care and simultaneously create the same opportunities for all old individuals, especially when they get fatal diseases. This is not only a humanitarian work but also an effective policy to balance society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91216216216 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59419866067 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530405405405 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.1488880284 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.181818182 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218236981798 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898296433579 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577659673925 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125583950154 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631896425142 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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