The diagram shows the process by which sheep embryos are cloned.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature.
The diagram illustrates the process on how embryos are cloned from a certain female sheep. To begin with, the following steps must have 2 different type of female sheeps, which are white and black coloured bodies.
First of all, white coloured sheep, which is called as sheep A, had its body cell taken out and the DNA that contained inside, was being extracted. Meanwhile, sheep B with black coloured body, had its egg cell withdrawn. The egg cell inside got removed and the only thing left was the nucleus.
Next, the extracted DNA from sheep A and sheep B’s nucleus, got fused together and resulted in a new embryo. Then, the fused cell in a new embryo would be placed in uterus of foster mother, which happened to be sheep B. The embryo would grow until its due time and the foster mother would give birth to a cloned lamb from sheep A.
- The table shows total revenue created by complementary medicine over three years The two charts illustrate the number of hospitals offering complementary medicine over twenty five years with a further classification showing which kinds of medicine proved 85
- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish Why do you think this is happening What can the governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced 73
- The table shows existing and projected changes in the proportion of people over 65 in the populations of three countries from 2015 to 2030 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant 43
- In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people s skin Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effect they have in terms of health on society 67
- Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television However television cannot replace the book as a learning tool which is why children are less well educated today To what extent do you agree with this statement 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then, while, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 696.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54901960784 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13322359708 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62091503268 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 200.7 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7825434931 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.0 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209957569639 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101575264231 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804552400733 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146759852114 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508123729105 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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