Do you agree or disagree with following statement it is better to hold a big party and invite many people to come than a small party where only a few close friends and family members are invited.
parents play a decisive role in their children's lives. while children learn academic knowledge in schools, parents teach them indispensable life skills, making them ready to appear in society. Since, nowadays, parents do not have enough free time to spend with their beloved children, they have to manage that little time to devote to their kids in the best way possible. As far as I am concerned, parents had better spend their free time playing games with their children. The following paragraphs will aptly substantiate my personal stance.
To commence with, as children need academic knowledge, likewise, they need social skills to be successful in their future life, which can be instilled into them through doing simple games with their parents. According to scientists, playing games have a major role in forming children's both cognitive ability and their characteristics in a way that makes them ready to appear in society. my personal experience is a compelling example of this. when I was a little boy, my father used to take me to parks at the weekends so that we could play games and have some fun with each other. There were always some ice-cream cars in the parks to induce kids to ask their parents to buy them ice cream. when I asked my father to buy me an ice cream my father gave me money and said to me go and buy ice cream for yourself and receive the change. By doing this, he wanted to teach me how I could buy something for myself. something that most kids are not able to do on their own. my father used such opportunities to give me the courage to feel confident and independent.
Secondly, parents can strengthen their relationship with their children by spending their free time playing games with them. nowadays, children are almost shy, which cause them to be reluctant to share their emotions and secrets with their family members. spending time playing games with them can allow them to tackle this problem. my personal experience is a compelling example of this notion. As I mentioned in the preceding paragraph, when my father and I went to the park at the weekends I always spoke to him about my school friends and about the relationship I had with them and also about who is my best friend and so forth while we were playing in the park. As a result, this made us so
close
and intimate with each other that I imparted all my secrets with him. Had not I had such a good chance to spend my leisure time playing with my father, I would not have been so
close
to him to confabulate.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that parents had better spend their little spare time playing games with their children. this is because parents can use this opportunity to improve their relationships with their children and because children can learn some requisite skills through playing games.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 84.0 43.0788530466 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2358.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 495.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76363636364 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53147838586 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.442424242424 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 705.6 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4455538017 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.52173913 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5217391304 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.17391304348 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0624443482833 0.236089414692 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.024689829789 0.076458572812 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0208245368939 0.0737576698707 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0350189633288 0.150856017488 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017481751746 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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