Humanity has made little real progress over the past century or so. Technological innovations have take place, but the overall condition of humanity is no better. War, violence, and poverty are still with us. Technology cannot change the condition of humanity.
As we can see in our daily news on the Internet or televisions, which are the outcome of our technological innovation, many humanity crisis are still acting on many areas. Therefore, the speaker here claim that humanity has little improvement despite the success of our technology today. In my view, although those humanity problems still exist, I cannot agree the assertion that we have little progress on humanity.
I concede that the humanity crisis does not be eradicated today. There are a part of people living under poverty line, struggling in cramped environments and a life of privation. Also, in some regions, there are still in the warfare, where people suffering from relentless attacks everyday. From these evidences, we should not denied that there are a many things that we can do and improve. However, is the situation is as worse as the speaker’s claim- that we made little progress? As far as I know, this claim is too extreme.
The first thing I want to defense for the humanity improvement starts from the comparison between the our generation and the previous one. Historically, warship happened regularly and frequently; in previous century, human beings experience two world war, which account for innumerable fatality, in just few decades. But, when we focus on this century, the world is experience unprecedented peace and prosperity. What’s more, in the past, the disease caused wide spread deaths and pain; such as small pox and black death. By contrast, with the improvement of hygienics, medical facility, and the invention of vaccines, people nowadays are living in happiness and health.
Besides, the progress of human society also makes many activity of charity possible. On one hand, the problem of starvation is, to some extent, relieved by globalization. With the advance of aero industry, wealthy country or the countries proliferating in agriculture can donate and ship their food resources the the regions in need. On the other, the empathy, an outgrowth of prosperity in some countries brought by the improvement of the technology, has spurred people participate in volunteering activities. For example, many doctors have gone to poor region to help people conquer the diseases and broadcasting the hygienic information; the organizations which help less development countries to build their infrastructures are mushrooming all over the world.
In sum, the speakers claim is overly pessimistic. Even though many humanity problems still exist, but it doesn’t mean it has no progress. From the evidences I showed above, we can see the humanity issue in modern society is improved much better than before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...eople suffering from relentless attacks everyday. From these evidences, we should not de...
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Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'deny'
Suggestion: deny
...ay. From these evidences, we should not denied that there are a many things that we ca...
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Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'our'?
Suggestion: the; our
...ment starts from the comparison between the our generation and the previous one. Histor...
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Line 7, column 51, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun activity seems to be countable; consider using: 'many activities'.
Suggestion: many activities
...he progress of human society also makes many activity of charity possible. On one hand, the p...
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Line 7, column 310, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...an donate and ship their food resources the the regions in need. On the other, the empa...
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Line 7, column 310, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...an donate and ship their food resources the the regions in need. On the other, the empa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, for example, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2236.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 424.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27358490566 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92452830189 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573113207547 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 700.2 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.38483146067 319% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.105911966 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.636363636 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222910070214 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616121278364 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592506034572 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129528795965 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674534714825 0.0667264976115 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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