What in your opinion, has been the single most important scientific or technological development of the last fifty years? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
The world has experienced a drastic change in terms of scientific and technological development in the last five decades. If we compare 1970s to now, we could see the difference is immense. In my opinion, one of the main thing influenced this change is the development of the internet. I feel this way several reasons, which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, the internet helped people to communicate with others from distance. In the past, It was difficult to have a proper conversation with your loved ones if they lived far away from you. However, this problem is solved easily when the video call and voice call became prevalent and free. We would not have been able to do this without the use of the internet. My own experience is a compelling example of this. when I was in high school, I went for an exchange program between overseas students and I had to stay away from my home for a year. I had no prior experience in living away from my parents, therefore I grieved a lot. However, I could get in touch with my family and friends through video calls and I was able to finish my program without missing my loved ones.
Secondly, social media became widespread due to the internet and made small business owners a place to advertise their business. It is difficult to make your business well-known and popular, especially when you have a relatively small business. But, thanks to social media platforms, these owners are able to promote their business without spending huge amount of money. I think my sister illustrates this idea perfectly. When she started her business, she had little to no financial freedom due to paying advertisement fees on televisions and billboards. Fast forward to now, she is taking advantage of the social media and the internet to effectively promote her brand and she uses the excessive amount of money used in television before to invest in her company. I believe it benefitted her and fellow business owners as well.
In conclusion, I am of the conviction that the internet is the main development that had significant impact in the last fifty years. his is because it made communications easier and accessible for everyone, also gave a platform to promote their business for business owners.
- TPO 42 Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 65
- In my country young people have a better life today than their parents enjoyed when they were young 76
- What in your opinion has been the single most important scientific or technological development of the last fifty years Use specific reasons and details to support your answer 70
- Young people enjoy their life more than old ones 76
- High salary job or job with lots of holidays 60
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, i feel, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1880.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83290488432 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77417319245 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53470437018 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1875799128 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5238095238 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5238095238 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0921784402023 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278552692117 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421194910983 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0596089098943 0.150856017488 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027052729033 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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