Information technology has changed our lives in many ways and dominates our homes, leisure and work activities.
Do the benefits outweigh the drawbacks?
The strong presence of information technology in modern society is well observed. Pervasive in nature, I.T has integrated into all aspects of our lives, including our living space, free time and work activities. This development has a number of positives, which will be shown to eclipse their negative counterparts in the following essay.
There are sensible concerns regarding the current domination of I.T. Forefront among them is the current public health degradation. Exposing to electrical devices for long hours is the main reason for eye-defects among children while addiction to social networking sites may cause users to withdraw from real life interactions. Also, as organisations are increasingly relying on digital platforms for data storage and transaction conduction, there are risks of security breaching. Hackers, for instance, can bypass protective measures to extract valuable information for their own gains.
However, it is undeniable that harnessing I.T properly can improve our lives in various domains. Entertainment is such a benefitting field, as thanks to connection to the Internet, people can release stress through various means, including playing online games or watching video clips. Remarkable transformations can also be seen in safer modern homes, which are now equipped with surveillance cameras and fire protection systems. Most importantly, practices at workplace are getting progressively more efficient thanks to the facilitation of I.T. Examples of this range from video conferencing, online time management to digital means of data storage and sharing. While issues of security should be acknowledged, heightened proactive measures against intrusion are frequently devised to tackle these problems.
In conclusion, I hold the view that the benefits of I.T outweigh its problems, which could be encountered with appropriate measures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, regarding, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82971014493 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09833879985 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692028985507 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2749426557 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.769230769 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126606187678 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433948539183 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584026955375 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786879418186 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568411987585 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.74 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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