Museums and art galleries should concentrate on local works rather than showing the cultures or artworks from other countries.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A country culture is rich in its heritage. Mostly each and every country is different in its cultural value and ethics that makes world diversified and yet united. Museum and art galleries play a vital role in unification. These places hold significant memories of world history and other countries traditions which create wisdom and pride in people across the world.
Showing the cultures of one country to another ease people to understand their culture. It might also help people to connect with them. One country should not bound themselves in showcase their art and culture to other nation.
Firstly, it gives opportunity to employment or hiring of expert to inform on wider scale about a particular object to other people of nation to explain them about his/her country nation art and culture so that people not perplexed and blend with their own.
Secondly, international relations will pacify. Positive behavioural changes can be seen.
Hence value own art and culture is as equally as important as others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...tive behavioural changes can be seen. Hence value own art and culture is as equally...
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Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: EQUALLY_AS[1]
Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
... Hence value own art and culture is as equally as important as others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16265060241 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57378416531 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650602409639 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2943042667 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9090909091 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0909090909 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198832330659 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780358530367 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616671846915 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966186573953 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597911083982 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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