The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A large faction of the society undeniably views a higher remuneration to be the vital element when selecting a job. However, many argue that job satisfaction should be the most significant determinant to choose a career path. I strongly agree with the latter viewpoint and will explain in detail the reasons why a higher pay package should not influence decision-making.
To begin with, in most cases, all highly remunerated careers are incredibly demanding. To illustrate with an example, jobs in the legal and investment banking industry, inherently expect employees to put in a minimum of 80-hour workweeks. As a result of which, such employees lose control of their work-life balance, and are too exhausted by the end of the week to spend all the money earned. This devastating lifestyle, not only makes them highly fatigued but also leads to massive health problems in the long run.
In contrast, choosing a career which gives you a significant job-satisfaction proves to be a better choice in making a person happy. Moreover, a working environment where one's ideas are truly appreciated, further ensures that employees get a deep sense of contribution. Furthermore, leading to increased levels of satisfaction. For example, in a survey of 1000 legal mid-level executives, the characteristic of a work-life balance was ranked much higher than the compensation. Therefore, having spent a good day at work, employees can spend quality time with their loved ones or in pursuing a hobby.
To summarize, I strongly agree that considering money in selecting a career or a job should not be a pivotal reason. Individuals need to weigh the pros and cons of other factors as well and take a well-thought-of decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in contrast, as a result, in most cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18705035971 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16469087919 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636690647482 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.8291087175 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162977182354 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531877928057 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569169783848 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928247397705 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265817008075 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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