Shopping has become a favourite passtime for many young people. Why is this the case? Should they be encouraged to spend their free time in a better way?
The time when people used to buy only important and fundamental items for their livelihood is long gone. Nowadays, shopping unnecessarily has become a habit for a maximum of youngsters. There are various reasons for this problem, which will be discussed in detail in this essay followed by my opinion on the solution to the issue.
To begin with, the main reason why teenagers are more inclined towards shopping is persuasive advertisements, such as TV commercials with attractive visuals and sales and discount offers displayed in malls and shops. Moreover, due to advancements in technology, online shopping has become an astronomical platform, where all kinds of products are available and can be bought in one click, thus, influencing young people to spend most of their free time in shopping. In addition to this, Easy Monthly Installments(EMIs) have made it much easier to spend without curbs. To exemplify, Amazon, which is one of the world's leading online shopping websites provide an EMI option on purchasing expensive products.
Consequently, in the long run, people face financial issues and go into debt. Therefore, it becomes critical that young people are encouraged by their guardians to save their earnings instead of spending it. Furthermore, they should be persuaded to utilize their leisure time in extracurricular activities, such as playing outdoor games, workout/exercising, dance, and music, or to volunteer in social work. This would not only enhance their health and fitness but also help in personality development.
To conclude, youngsters waste their spare time shopping because of the easy access to goods and compelling adverts. Also, it requires minimum efforts and makes them sluggish. However, they should be encouraged to invest their leisure time in more productive activities, which would be beneficial in saving their expenses as well as developing their personality both physically and mentally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45514950166 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05037307316 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641196013289 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6679888567 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.285714286 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386325112719 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110420984176 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729984218292 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219224050652 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023179156957 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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