In the past, many male leaders have led our society to conflicts and violence. The world would be better governed and more peaceful if it was ruled by women. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Recently, it is believed that leader should be woman in lieu of man to pretend conflicts and violence. Although this state seems reasonable, I strongly disagree with it.
There are two compelling reasons for people to believe this suggestion may be unsuitable. First, while woman have gentler personality than man in the way they act, it is not true to believe all female leaders will dominate their countries in peace. For example, under the leadership of Pratibha Patil - the first female president of India, there were many clash and conflicts still occuring, which means that a female leader can not guarantee a peaceful society. Another reason is all the wars and conflicts should not be blamed for male leaders because they are attributable to many factors else. In fact, it is not fair if a men president is criticized because his country is in war, the reason of the war is other countries invade his territory.
Due to aforementioned causes, I think gender issue is not the main contribution but some other factors. In terms of leaders’ capability, regardless of male or female, if they are talented, they can avoid conflicts in their countries or ease them. For illustrate, if there are some groups of citizens protest to require for some rights, the president can consider to implement a suitable policy to solve this problem. This is obvious that this action can be done by both men and women leaders. From the perspective of society, there are some objective factors making clash and violence, which is unavoidable so it is not mistakes of particular gender of the leader. Another factor is exploding president, the staffs and the cabinet in governments which is also a crucial part deciding social content of the country.
In conclusion, I highly suggest that people should not consider gender of president is the main reason lead violence and conflicts in society because it is attributable to many other causes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 352, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun clash seems to be countable; consider using: 'many clashes'.
Suggestion: many clashes
...t female president of India, there were many clash and conflicts still occuring, which mea...
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Line 4, column 628, Rule ID: MAN_MEN[1]
Message: 'man' is the singular form of 'men'. Consider using 'man'?
Suggestion: man
...tors else. In fact, it is not fair if a men president is criticized because his cou...
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Line 6, column 355, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider implementing'.
Suggestion: consider implementing
...uire for some rights, the president can consider to implement a suitable policy to solve this problem...
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Line 8, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... should not consider gender of president is the main reason lead violence and con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, still, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01238390093 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72964296081 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532507739938 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4708783781 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.642857143 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14574954199 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512077406705 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041119612362 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939597079911 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160814168422 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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