Many people want their country to host an international sporting event. Others believe that international event bring more problem than benefits. Discuss both views and include your opinion, supported by examples.
An sport event is a happening that involves a lot of organization and good local and financial conditions from it hosts, regardless of weather or not it is an international event. It also involves a recognition before the world for a country and a kind of developing if the investments were well spend. Due to this, many people want their country to host an international sporting event whereas other people don't think it is a good idea.
Some people believe that to host an international sporting event like the Olympic Games and the World Football Cup, generates a positive effect on the local e...
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Sentence: Other concerns is that the governors need to incur large expensives after the event for maintence of the structure.
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Sentence: Some investments were done in the city that made it being more known and the population could enjoy a little of this investments in sports, improvements in the streets and also the employment had a increase.
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Sentence: Cities that hosted the Olympic Games as Barcelona 1992, Sidney 2000 and Beijing2008 proves that it can produce positive resoults for the country and the cities too.
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