In any field — business, politics, education, government — those in power should step down after a few years
In a fast-changing global community, the world is moving ahead with the immense speed. In such a meteorically changing community, constituent institutions like a business, politics, education, etc. should also be protean in acknowledging and working on their roles. These institutions will be able to handle their role efficiently when multiple leaders with different views and approaches are given a chance to lead these following each other. Thus, I believe that in any field, those in power should step down after a few years to serve a higher cause.
First of all, holding power for too long can make any leader less aware of the ground reality. To illustrate this, let us look at the example of a cellular company Nokia. It’s undoubted that it was one of the most successful cellular companies during the 2000s. It was its success that lead to believe the long sitting management at that time, whatever they are doing is working and shouldn’t change a thing about it. Even though the world was leaning in favor of android phones at that time, the management failed to grasp this and faced massive losses even to the point of closing down the business. Had the management been well aware of the ground reality and given chance to proponents of the change to lead, it might have continued to enjoy the same success. Hence, leadership changes are essential from time to time to flourish.
Secondly, there is a high chance that people holding power for long might grow less passionate about their duties. Also, more dangerously, sometimes might think or act like an autocrat as one might think that a person having power for long can not be removed from the position and can get away with anything. For example, unfortunately, there are still many countries in the world which are ruled by some despots/single party(ironically enough countries have “democratic” in their names). It’s because of the assurance that no one can remove them from power as they have enjoyed power throughout their lives, they feel they are not answerable to anyone-not even to people ruled by them. Thus, in many democratic countries including the USA, the commander-in-chief can not hold office after two terms. Moreover, the limited time in such office galvanizes the person to achieve more in less time as everyone wants his/her term to be remembered in history written-the constraint person in power holding for long might not feel and can push towards apathy towards the job.
Admittedly, some might argue that time is not enough to implement long term changes/projects. Also, the next person coming to power might not carry out the projects started by the previous person with the same vigor and passion or might not complete at all. But, we should also keep in mind that the next person also won’t be holding power forever and people with the agreement of such projects will complete the same when came to power. Moreover, People who left the power can also work with the current people in power as advisors to help them understand and guide through the same.
Even though, there are some drawbacks of making a person leave the power after say 5 years like being not enough time to carry out the changes, in today’s fast-changing world half a decade is not too short time period and changes can be carried out in a way to minimize the hindrance. And, keeping someone in power for long-duration might change their attitude towards the role or can make them indifferent. Therefore, people in power in any field should step down after their term.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'time to'.
Suggestion: time to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 89.0 58.6224719101 152% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2949.0 2235.4752809 132% => OK
No of words: 601.0 442.535393258 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90682196339 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95129289623 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.663085345 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 285.0 215.323595506 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474209650582 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 903.6 704.065955056 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8094248371 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.96 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.04 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165158614685 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606770137359 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123009772803 0.0758088955206 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112926693158 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742907496757 0.0667264976115 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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