tpo 54 lake salinity
Some controversy has been generated about whether or not the lake's salinity would killed fish and bird populations. The reading states that three are three possible stratgies that people could use to stop save these animals' population by reducing the lakes' salinity. The speaker, however, argues that none of these points are actually practicle or realistic.
The first point of dispute is if the extracting salt by using desalination facilities could be beneficial. The lecturer explains that pumping water to the lakes leads to the evaporation of water. Therefore, the slat and other toxic chemical matrials will left behind such as Selinum. Selinum is a very dengerous element, if it is speard by wind on to the atmosphere, and people breath it in, it might cause a serious health issues. By contrast, the writer is simply content to accept that pumping water in could lead to serious health issues.
The second controversial issue is about if dilution of the lakes' salt by using ocean's water could be adventageous. According to the professor, it is true that ocean water could help in reduce the salinity. However, using pipelines and canals to deliver the water from ocean could be exobitant expecially if the need to conduct it from really far places. In addition, the professor adds that the closest place to is about 100 Kilometer away from the lake. In spite of that interestingly, the author believes that using pipeline and canlas is an effective way to readuce the lakes salinity.
The final point of disput is the question of if buliding dividing walls to sperate the water into sections will work. The speaker argues that constructiong walls is not a good idea. This is because some gelogical effects could destroy these walls especially the area of frequent and intens of natural disaster such as erthquick. Thus, these events could destroy the walls and lead the water of low salinity mix with water of high salinity. Despite all these possible rationale, the writer ignores all these potenial explanations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...me controversy has been generated about whether or not the lakes salinity would killed fish an...
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Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'lakes'' or 'lake's'?
Suggestion: lakes'; lake's
...been generated about whether or not the lakes salinity would killed fish and bird pop...
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Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'kill'
Suggestion: kill
...whether or not the lakes salinity would killed fish and bird populations. The reading ...
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Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
...hat people could use to stop save these animals population by reducing the lakes salini...
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Line 1, column 252, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'lakes'' or 'lake's'?
Suggestion: lakes'; lake's
...hese animals population by reducing the lakes salinity. The speaker, however, argues ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...re actually practicle or realistic. The first point of dispute is if the extrac...
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Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ination facilities could be beneficial. The lecturer explains that pumping water to...
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Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'leave'
Suggestion: leave
... and other toxic chemical matrials will left behind such as Selinum. Selinum is a ve...
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Line 5, column 426, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Kilometer' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kilometers'.
Suggestion: Kilometers
... that the closest place to is about 100 Kilometer away from the lake. In spite of that in...
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Line 5, column 574, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'lakes'' or 'lake's'?
Suggestion: lakes'; lake's
...nlas is an effective way to readuce the lakes salinity. The final point of disput...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, really, second, so, therefore, thus, in addition, such as, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1373.03311258 124% => OK
No of words: 336.0 270.72406181 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05654761905 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62481609063 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 145.348785872 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53869047619 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 419.366225166 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4535967715 49.2860985944 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.3888888889 110.228320801 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06452816374 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404175485895 0.272083759551 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117630121283 0.0996497079465 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982346163938 0.0662205650399 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221713915458 0.162205337803 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787898813546 0.0443174109184 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 63.6247240618 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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