Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge. To what extend is this a positive or a negative development?
These days, thanks to modern technology, man people from all over the world have accessed the internet. Internet provides them with golden opportunity to download copyrighted music, movies and books freely. It is clear that this way has several negative and positive consequences that can not be ignored.
First of all the positive consequences that it has, is that individuals from different kinds of age group can gain newest music and books through internet for no charge just by one click and increase their knowledge and information easily which would never happen if they wanted to buy these...
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Category: Good Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Words: 343 350
No. of Characters: 1666 1500
No. of Different Words: 176 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.304 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.857 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.123 0.07
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