Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
playing a game in computer is common platform for entertainment in today's world. however, in my opinion, playing game may have a serious disadvantages in the personal life. Supporting this position, I am going to point out a few reason behind my position vividly.
First of all, playing a game in computer will retard the performance of student in their study. In the age of growing and learning a many things, children focus more in the gaming and forget to accomplish the target in their study. my personal experience back up this statement. when I was in class 8, I bought a play station and quickly addicted with it. Then, I forget to do my homework, in fact I lost my excitement for the study cause I was so much engaged in the game; as a result, I had failed in a terminal examination. Since, it is extremely engaging, a young mind may devote more time on playing than studying.
One masssive ill effect of the computer gaming is to create an unhealthy beings. people will sit around a computer table almost all day; they bearly do the physical exercise, follow their hygenic routine and foremost, they may weaken they sight because of too long engagement in the computer screen. In addition, on sitting in the chair more time may not according to our natural posture, which will problematic in a long run causing a back pain.
Another problem with computer gaming is that children may lose a social gesture and sobriety. when gaming time, they will not interact with friend, family and relatives. Consequently, they will find a social event around them awkward and discomfit. they even do not know how people get entertained, what makes people offended and what to say in the mean time. however, if they will not developed gaming habit, they have a plenty of time to get to know the social skills.
In conclusion, computer gaming is not profitable for the children in terms of health, academic and personality development basis. it would be better if children will invest their time in other important activities like studying, playing sports and interacting with people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, may, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8356545961 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67122060031 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554317548747 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3427301482 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3684210526 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8947368421 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63157894737 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252812389836 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813251341023 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405065649704 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145804458938 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369041001979 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.