The water use in 2000 by six countries in the Middle East.
The table shows six different countries in the Middle East used water in 2000. At first glance, it is evident that while Bahrain and Kuwait use of water predominantly for domestic purposes, the other fours countries used it mainly for agriculture.
Turning first to Kuwait and Bahrain, Kuwait had the highest use of water, at 63%, whereas its use for agriculture was only a third of this. Accounting for a slightly lower of use for domestic purposes was Bahrain, but it used two times more water that Kuwait for agriculture.
In contrast to this, the remaining four countries used much more water for agriculture. The highest were Saudi Arabia (85%) and Oman (83%). Interestingly though, these countries had particularly low levels of domestic water use. Next, Qatar and UAE used 62% and 65% respectively for agriculture and about half this amount for domestic purposes.
Finally, all countries used very low amounts for industrial purposes, all at under 8%, the only exception being Kuwait at just under 20%
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whereas its use for agriculture was only a third of this.
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but it used two times more water that Kuwait for agriculture.
but it used two times more water than Kuwait for agriculture.
and about half this amount for domestic purposes.
and about half this amount is for domestic purposes.
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