The graph shows the income of four cafes in New York in last year.
The line chart gives information about the profits of four different types of the cafe in NewYork last year.
Generally, it can be seen that the income of the tea room fluctuated significantly over the year and plunged in the last three months whereas other kinds of the cafe which increased more than at the end of the period compared to the beginning.
At the begining of the period, 160 000 dollars was the money that the tea room earned in January, this figure was followed by Internet express, wifi cafe and cafe cool, at 100 re000 dollars, 50 000 dollars and 30 000 dollars respectively.
From January to August, the statistics of the tea room and cafe cool had a dramatic fluctuation to 130 000 dollars and 50 000 dollars respectively. The figure for wifi cafe increased substantially and fall down to 60 000 dollars in September. while Internet express remained unchanged at 80 000 dollars. In common, the income of the tea room decreased dramatically to 50 unit in December, whereas other profit of cafe increased at 190, 140 and 120 000 dollars respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...express, wifi cafe and cafe cool, at 100 re000 dollars, 50 000 dollars and 30 000...
^^
Line 4, column 244, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...ll down to 60 000 dollars in September. while Internet express remained unchanged at ...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 244, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ll down to 60 000 dollars in September. while Internet express remained unchanged at ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77419354839 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73621583498 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537634408602 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3842644741 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.857142857 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150982458903 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854279341046 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728579845461 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124644188807 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071530424329 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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