A while ago you had lent a friend a suitcase, which he/she has not returned yet. Write a letter to him/her reminding to bring it back and say
What suitcase and when did he/she borrow it?
Why do you need it back?
What should he/she do about it?
Dear Naina,
Its been a while since we meet. I hope you and your family are doing well. I writing to you regarding the suitcase, which you had borrowed from me around 2 months ago when you were going to the Shimla for a holiday.
I am in critical need of that suitcase. as the day after tomorrow, i will be travelling to my hometown and have nothing to pack my stuff in. Although i have one more bag as well, which i tried placing my things in, however, it seems to be quite small and could not fit my requirement.
I didn't want to rush you for this, but will it be possible for you to return it by tomorrow?. So it will be easy for me to get ready for my journey on time without any hassle. If you need any help, let me know. I can also visit your place to collect it if you are occupied currently.
Sorry for the last-minute trouble. See you soon.
Best regards
Harpreet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...pe you and your family are doing well. I writing to you regarding the suitcase, ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... going to the Shimla for a holiday. I am in critical need of that suitcase. a...
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Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...I am in critical need of that suitcase. as the day after tomorrow, i will be trave...
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Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...at suitcase. as the day after tomorrow, i will be travelling to my hometown and h...
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Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ough i have one more bag as well, which i tried placing my things in, however, it...
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Line 7, column 3, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...and could not fit my requirement. I didnt want to rush you for this, but will it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 718.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17441860465 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27936637842 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668604651163 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.183382643 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.2307692308 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2307692308 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138692346877 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524799991281 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055670340942 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893101591733 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728985513479 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.8 8.37731958763 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.02 8.71597938144 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.