In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
It is true people are living longer nowadays. In the early 19th century the average life expectancy at birth was 50 years but nowadays it is 75 years. If we go through research data then it can be surprising that there is such a vast increase in the life span of human beings. There are several causes of this phenomenon.
First, today's medical services are advanced enough that doctors are able to cure different diseases. Even people with cancer and tumors are getting cured now. The formulation of new medicines and supplements help people live longer. In 2019 the corona virus spread widely throughout the world but researchers found vaccination in 6 months to prevent patients with corona virus. The knowledge of science and research techniques is one of the major reasons to make life longer.
Second, previously people used home remedies and herbs to cure illness which was not sufficient. These days we have a wide range of medicines from different brands to help patients with several diseases. Even patients with the same problem get different medicines as per their needs. For example, two people have a common cough and cold one feels better with homemade special tea but others do not because of the immunity and body building of that person.
Third, there are so many types of machinery to help medical science to deal with chronic illness as well as understanding body changes. Laboratories have different types of blood test machinery which detect the cause of sickness and there are x ray, ultrasounds and other machinery also available in hospitals to find problem areas in a person’s body. Such advancement in medical services makes human beings have a greater life span.
Finally, these are a few reasons mentioned in the above paragraphs which are the cause of living longer life phenomenon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, then, third, well, for example, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00986842105 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55881093823 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582236842105 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.434793828 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5882352941 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8823529412 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16372234554 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676436837882 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856557679074 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106663714023 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694441477612 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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