A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/She asked for your advice about studying this subject.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- Give details of the course you took at the university
- Explain why you recommend the university
- Give some advice about how to apply
Dear Sophia,
Hope your doing well? It’s been a minute since our last conversation regarding applying for a Bachelors of Science degree in public health at the University of Ibadan.
Firstly, you know I wasn’t always passionate about public health. My preference at the time of our graduation from high school was radiology. However, today I have no regrets and will encourage you to follow your passion about studying this course. Public health covers a wide range in medical sciences and it bothers a on the general welfare of people and communities.
Recommending University of Ibadan isn’t as a result of bias since its my alumni but it still stands as the best university in Nigeria with international ratings. Their transcript is accepted by any university in the world in the event you desire to study overseas subsequently.
Due to the corona virus pandemic, you currently have to apply online. First start by creating a log in ID on their website and follow the process accordingly. On completion, you will be required to send hard copies of your application via post to the administrative office.
I’m super elated by your choice and as always, I’ll be here to assist you at whatever point of your application and your period of study.
Love always,
Daren
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a bachelor' or simply 'Bachelors'?
Suggestion: a bachelor; Bachelors
...ast conversation regarding applying for a Bachelors of Science degree in public health at t...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ange in medical sciences and it bothers a on the general welfare of people and co...
^
Line 7, column 67, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... Ibadan isn’t as a result of bias since its my alumni but it still stands as the be...
^^^
Line 13, column 6, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...ation and your period of study. Love always, Daren
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, however, regarding, so, still, well, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07476635514 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81441890896 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654205607477 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7994082797 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5384615385 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4615384615 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310412270957 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901882940263 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741848149006 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164424978616 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056315896804 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a bachelor' or simply 'Bachelors'?
Suggestion: a bachelor; Bachelors
...ast conversation regarding applying for a Bachelors of Science degree in public health at t...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ange in medical sciences and it bothers a on the general welfare of people and co...
^
Line 7, column 67, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... Ibadan isn’t as a result of bias since its my alumni but it still stands as the be...
^^^
Line 13, column 6, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...ation and your period of study. Love always, Daren
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, however, regarding, so, still, well, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07476635514 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81441890896 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654205607477 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7994082797 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5384615385 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4615384615 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310412270957 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901882940263 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741848149006 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164424978616 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056315896804 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.