do you agree or disagree that professors should pay more to develop the educational system
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors.
We cannot turn a blind eye to the significant role of money in our life. However, is it fair to think that the professor’s compensation will develop the type of education? In my point of view, I personally believe that there are many other aspects we can concentrate on to achieve our goals in a learning system which I will explore in the following article.
To begin with, researches could be considered as one of the smartest ways to improve the educational pathway. through these researches we can resolve many problems or even prevent it. Therefore, when there are enough financial supports to these kinds of projects, that means we will have a new opportunity for inventions. For instance, when I was in fourth grade in dentistry college in Iraq. We started to hand on patients and we had many problems while using the manual equipment. Therefore, I was working with other professors in a research to develop the use of a rotary system ” An electric device used to clean the canals instead of the traditional manual ways.” Fortunately, the university has been accepted our suggestion to fund this project which in turn helped us to finish this research with wonderful results to minimize the complications and pain to the patient.
What’s more, hard work with no advanced tools or devices will restrict the results of work. Therefore, it is optimal important to support and supply the universities and schools with advanced equipment to achieve terrific results. For example, my sister is a pharmacist who works in pandemic disease labs in Dubai. She mentions that through the terrible situation of the COVID19, the government decided to support the university with advanced microscopes. The price for each one is one million dollars. However, it is worthy to spend money on these kinds of facilities because it will help the population in general even if they chance to discover the treatment or vaccine is little.
In conclusion, we cannot ignore the wonderful role of professors in the learning journey and therefore they have to be paid well. On the other hand, there are many other aspects should be considered like funding researches and equipment.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 111, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Through
...ays to improve the educational pathway. through these researches we can resolve many pr...
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Line 8, column 534, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
... I was working with other professors in a research to develop the use of a rotary system ”...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 583, Rule ID: EN_UNPAIRED_BRACKETS
Message: Unpaired symbol: '“' seems to be missing
...h to develop the use of a rotary system ” An electric device used to clean the ca...
^
Line 8, column 668, Rule ID: EN_UNPAIRED_BRACKETS
Message: Unpaired symbol: '“' seems to be missing
... instead of the traditional manual ways.” Fortunately, the university has been ac...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0824742268 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84473977235 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533505154639 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.8234857289 48.9658058833 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.789473684 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4210526316 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68421052632 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144673161135 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443803298055 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748220131117 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10306159678 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925560384365 0.0645574589148 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 111, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Through
...ays to improve the educational pathway. through these researches we can resolve many pr...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 534, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
... I was working with other professors in a research to develop the use of a rotary system ”...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 583, Rule ID: EN_UNPAIRED_BRACKETS
Message: Unpaired symbol: '“' seems to be missing
...h to develop the use of a rotary system ” An electric device used to clean the ca...
^
Line 8, column 668, Rule ID: EN_UNPAIRED_BRACKETS
Message: Unpaired symbol: '“' seems to be missing
... instead of the traditional manual ways.” Fortunately, the university has been ac...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0824742268 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84473977235 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533505154639 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.8234857289 48.9658058833 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.789473684 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4210526316 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68421052632 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144673161135 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443803298055 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748220131117 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10306159678 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925560384365 0.0645574589148 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.