Loyal

Essay topics:

Loyal

Loyal, a tall tree stump, dense foliage, immortalized,

Loyal, is the sea, the waves are flowing, the atmosphere is silver.

The country of a thousand years, civilization for a thousand years, and still, faithful - a call for a thousand years.

The owner of the lottery agent shop gives the winning lottery ticket to the customers without any hesitation, how loyal is this "man of steel"?

Loyalty, is the character's strongest guise in the storm of history.

Truong Giang water waves rolled to the east, historical figures stood on the wave guiding the mountain, wrote the words, demanding loyalty; a peasant wearing grass shoes became emperor. Liu Bei was raging in the middle of the Three Kingdoms in a flourishing period, "three parts of the world are part of him"; faithful, made Tong Giang, a writer, unable to prosper the country, dancing and martial arts could not stabilize the country, but in the end he became a heroic leader, raising the banner. change to preside over the religion to fly before the wind; Faithfulness, causing sparks of fire on the top of the mountain of Cuong Province to spread all over the country. 90 years since its founding, the Chinese Communist Party has led the people of the country to achieve liberation, to create happiness, to go on a well-off path ...

Loyalty, is a guise to ensure that big businesses stand firm.

From time to time, products under the “Haier” label have gone through the test of loyalty, launched the slogan of purifying all non-conforming products, leading “Haier” to step up. huge arena 500 strong businesses in the world, going deeper into the heart of everyone; The staff of "Alibaba E-Commerce Service Center" wanted to take a "shortcut", infringing on the interests of customers, General Director Ma Van immediately expelled them, and publicly apologized. Believe that the career path of the "Alibaba" Group will go further and further.
Loyalty, the more is the moral guise of a conscientious man.

Thesis has a saying "faithful language, chief executive chi", that is, words must be honest and honest, actions must be serious. Creed has been handed down from ancient times, today has interpreted a different meaning. Ton Dong and Ton Thuy Lam, are two construction contractors named "Two faithful brothers", because they do not want to owe the wages of construction workers from small provinces, during the night of heavy snowfall. relay each other in a dramatic way. Snow fell silent, but their loyalty was strongly and deeply carved into the ground.

On the contrary, making up the ridiculous are the "idiots" who openly provoke with loyalty, "amber Dragon Chinh", which means that Mr. Chu Chinh Long takes a picture of fake Hoa Nam tiger exposed by everyone. but stubbornly refused to confess, he was just a simple farmer because he faked and was sentenced to prison; the event "Dr. Duong Tuan", formerly known as "Duong Tuan" is known as "the king of alcohol collar work", but then became a scholar; "The Big Head Baby Event" was caused by fake formula with Tam Loc brand, who is the killer?

Counterfeiters become the laughingstock of the world.

Loyal, is a common call from a thousand years distant. Through thousands of years of reincarnation, loyalty has always been with us everywhere. The edge of loyalty, which is always clear despite the downwind, leads us forward, forward.

A call from ancient times, word after language, it was a call to you, that was a solid faithfulness that could not be changed like a towering mountain.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'characters the strongest'.
Suggestion: characters the strongest
...;man of steel'? Loyalty, is the characters strongest guise in the storm of history. Truon...
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Line 11, column 509, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Change
...me a heroic leader, raising the banner. change to preside over the religion to fly bef...
^^^^^^
Line 15, column 344, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rce Service Center' wanted to take a 'shortcut', infringing on the...
^
Line 18, column 455, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Relay
...es, during the night of heavy snowfall. relay each other in a dramatic way. Snow fell...
^^^^^
Line 18, column 472, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a dramatic way" with adverb for "dramatic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ght of heavy snowfall. relay each other in a dramatic way. Snow fell silent, but their loyalty wa...
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Line 20, column 230, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...fake Hoa Nam tiger exposed by everyone. but stubbornly refused to confess, he was j...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, then, well, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 82.0 41.998997996 195% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3095.0 1615.20841683 192% => OK
No of words: 589.0 315.596192385 187% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25466893039 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92639038232 4.20363070211 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02954833942 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 363.0 176.041082164 206% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616298811545 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 893.7 506.74238477 176% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 15.0 2.52805611222 593% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.6958744754 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.8 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.56 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.38176352705 320% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.075549820656 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0329286407586 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956375939664 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0605940031599 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104995626399 0.056905535591 185% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 174.0 78.4519038076 222% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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