Some people think that in order to produce a happy society, it is necessary to ensure that there is only a small difference between the earnings of the richest and poorest. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Noted that, money is evil for all problems and is not the only solution. Some people say there should be a minor difference in income between rich and needy people that can produce a joyful community. The following essay will explain this reckoning further about can we produce a peaceful society or not?
Most say that the masses from many developing nations are happier when compared to the people from developed nations. As a matter of fact that, having more money makes people greedy, and thrives to generate more income and reverse is not possible. In other words, wealthy people can easily afford top international universities and afford that expensive fee while the poor are not capable. For riches, this eventually creates easy opportunities for employment, or have the capital for investment to start own businesses whereas, poor works for them hence, the entire cycle remains the same. Now the question is are the riches happy? Well, certainly not, the hunger and greed never stop for the materialistic possessions.
On the flip side, the low paid individuals start to earn closer to high paying and are sipping the taste of average richness will also strive to want more. In addition, having a slight difference in the pay may not generate happy families but more desires. Granted, money can arguably bring happiness but a lifetime of money spell can make you question your sanity and existential life. For instance, an England royal family, Harry gave up his crown to have a simple normal life with his wife since the couple was fed up with all the publicities and fabricated stories often in the newspapers and magazines about their personal life.
In conclusion, reducing the difference in the incomes cannot simply produce happy communities, it is the individuals who have to decide what is the purpose of the life and have a meaningful livelihood, opt for the right choice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to top'
Suggestion: to top
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Line 5, column 635, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd magazines about their personal life. In conclusion, reducing the difference i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99369085174 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59420714988 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621451104101 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5785893293 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.071428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13173233169 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471947668866 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046468749147 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908526946195 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510818328056 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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