People now tend to move to the big cities to find the jobs. Discuss the causes and effects of this trend. Write at least 250 words.
Today, people in the country, especially the young ones, have a tendency to move to big cities. There are many reasons for this trend, but the main reason might be the better job market there. This movement do have some major influences on the cities they move to.
It is clear that where there are more people, there are more jobs, let alone the fact that facilities, industrial zones, companies in cities are much more plentiful and developed than those in the countryside. Therefore, people could have much more job opportunities and higher income in the cities.
Another motivation behind this tendency is the changes in agriculture in the rural areas. With the development of science and technology, modern farming requires less man power which can be easily replaced by new machines. Innovative agricultural methods are also much more prolific while labors are less needed. This leads to the lack of job opportunities in the rural areas today, pushing people, especially the young ones, to move to cities in search of jobs.
Besides the advantages of moving to big cities which is mentioned above, this trend could cause several major effects in cities: environmental issues, traffic problems, declined social infrastructure, unemployment and society’s vices.
Large population in cities, especially the big ones, is very like to cause pollution and the lack of resources for the living of people there. In many modern cities, the citizens must endure a lot of health problems relating to the air and water pollution. Collecting and processing garbage in some cities are not implemented properly, leading to other environmental problems. Clean water and energy resources for daily activities as well as manufacturing could have become inadequate in many cities in developing countries.
When there are more people, citizens in large metropolitan areas have to face with a lot of traffic problems every day. They are the traffic jams and accidents, which seems to be the effects of highly dense population. The movement of people to cities also put more pressure on the social infrastructure like roads, bridges, buildings, …, leading to the rapid deterioration of them.
It is evident that job opportunities are more available in big cities, but too many people competing in limited areas may lead to unemployment. Besides, not all people moving to cities are qualified enough to find a good job there, thus some of them end up working in industrial zones or making a living by manual works, or even worse: being jobless. The inefficient facilities, pollution, and unemployment could cause many society’s vices which are troubling both the governments and citizens in cities.
In the new era of science and technology, the movement of people who are in search for jobs in cities is inevitable. They do contribute to the development of cities, but this trend also posts some threats to the life in cities, which requires the cooperation of both the governments and all citizens to handle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2520.0 1615.20841683 156% => OK
No of words: 489.0 315.596192385 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15337423313 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84064906268 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470347648262 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 804.6 506.74238477 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7632860582 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.545454545 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2272727273 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222490949174 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683425992315 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526759004196 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116595007977 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551540425469 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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