Some people think that we can use animals in any way for the benefits of human beings. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion
There is no denying the fact that human being is a most intelligent animal in the world. The more intelligent a person is the more creative or smarty they work. Therefore, some people believe that human beings can use animals in safe way to get more benefits from them. Others, feels it is a violation of animal rights. In my opinion, if human beings do not harm animals and still find the way to benefits from them, that it is considered to be a good idea. Otherwise, I strongly condemn the idea. In this essay I will further discuss the both opinions.
It is true that everyone have a tendency to believe what they see or hear and when someone harm the other creatures then we should take rigorous action against that person. Firstly, every one has a right to live whether you are animal or human beings. Therefore, hurting a speak less creature is a crime according to law of universe. Secondly, human beings are considered one of the greatest and intelligent species. So, we can find a way to develop new technology that help us to understand animals more and more, and used that technology to help them not harm them.
On the other hand, sometimes human kind are so desperate that they have to used the animals in order to survive in this world. For example, in the time of pandemic, sometimes scientist have no other choice to experiment on aminals and develop a vaccine by testing on animals and ensure that they work on human as well. Furthermore, in order to balance the nature, we have to monitor what is happening around us, and what species to growing fast or destroyed the nature. In that time we have to control the excessive species in order to save our crops or forest.
In conclusion, it is clear that every lives on our planet is precious. Being an intelligent species, we have to take care of them and preserve the endangered species as well. However, in desperate time need extraordinary measures. In the time of pandemic or other dangerous situations, human kind have to sacrifice some animals in the sake of human species.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 92, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'harms'.
Suggestion: harms
... what they see or hear and when someone harm the other creatures then we should take...
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Line 2, column 272, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...mal or human beings. Therefore, hurting a speak less creature is a crime according to l...
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Line 2, column 392, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eings are considered one of the greatest and intelligent species. So, we can find...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61095890411 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53846520402 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487671232877 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6560619838 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.15 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298292435288 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834217653412 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818264861285 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177215410568 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076610447651 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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