Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sports are as important for adults as they are for children. Give specific examples.
Playing sports keep every individual healthy, and active irrespective of adult or children. no doubt it plays the most important role in everyone's life. However, adults hold the opinion that the activity of playing sports belong to children. Not only sports but, also any physical activity keeps every individual active and healthy thus, I strongly agree with the above prompt that sports as prominent for adults as they are for children for the following three reasons.
Firstly, in the hustle-bustle of life, almost all adults compromise their health over the rat race. Everyone is running behind the career and overlooking the health. Erstwhile people used to give the most priority to health than wealth. For example, my elder brother working in a call center from morning to night and sometimes night sifts. Due to his busy schedule, he was overlooking his health issue of migraines. later migraine turns so intense that he needs to go to the hospital for two months' treatment.
Secondly, by playing games and sports one can inculcate within itself the skill of teamwork and cooperation. It helps to create a friendly bond between employees that generates a healthy atmosphere leading to augment in the productivity of the company. The relation between coherence and comprehension boosts every employee's performance and feasibility. my father works in an IT company and his company arranges a sports weekend every month. He plays volleyball and soccer all together with his colleagues. He told me how he is friendly with his employees and it helps to focus on work with improving mental health.
Moreover, playing sports works as a medium of stress relief. People who are constantly under stress due to work or any other reason feel relieved after playing sports. My aunt is a doctor and he suggests her clients play their favorite game when they are in stress. This will change the mindset and focus on the problem and refresh mental health. Additionally, it increases the factor of competition in an individual.
In totality, playing sports or doing any physical activity is conducive to one individual growth and development. Thus I strongly agree that sports are as important for adults as they are for children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10410958904 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70050835133 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550684931507 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4292924916 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8695652174 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86956521739 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270358593647 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729999671849 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118315986803 0.0737576698707 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172871615496 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144423157791 0.0645574589148 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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