adaptation of Broccoli in temperate climates with mild summers.
In the reading stated about that Broccli ususally grown in West of America such As North of America because of suitable environment to grwoth and reproduction. On the other hand another region such east coast is one the sink for consume of broccli that si very far-reaching to transpoprt. Also, In the article stated that maybe it possible to growth of this crop in east coast and will be decrease of high cost of transportation while the summer is very hot to growth. In the lecture professor elaborate her disagreement about this atricle by some reason that as follows.
to begin with, IN the rading stated that if the broccli growth in east coast. the cost of produciton and transportation will be decreased and will a low cost broccli availabe for resident of east coast. In the lecture professor asserted that it is possible to growth broccli but the yield and qulaity is very low to compared to west broccoli. In the west filed the production of this crop is high and it will be cost effective for consumer to use this crop for east coast resindent in spite of cost of transportation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, while, such as, in spite of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 1977.66487455 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 193.0 407.700716846 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66839378238 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.48103885553 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71442266763 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 212.727598566 43% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471502590674 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 278.1 618.680645161 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9232061015 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.625 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.625 5.45110844103 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.037230967351 0.236089414692 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0212997377903 0.076458572812 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285440180049 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0303900123348 0.150856017488 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00880012919751 0.0645574589148 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 86.8835125448 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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