You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Write at least 250 words.
In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby.
There has been a dramatic transformation in the ways of shopping within a few years. For most people shopping today is their favorite past time activity but, in the old days it was considered a routine chore. In my perspective, this is a positive trend and its details will be described further in this essay.
In the 20th century, shopping has become more fascinating than ever. Hundreds and thousands of options are available to purchase a single item. Extravagant malls, online websites and big shopping complexes have succeeded in providing customers a range of valuables that they are willing to buy. Also, the delivery of items at the doorstep and availability of customized product are added advantages. Thus, the advancement in technology has made an old routine job more interesting.
On the other hand, it is unlikely for a shopkeeper to dupe his customers anymore. The consumer is able to compare the price, quality and other factors before making an important purchase owing to the powers of the internet. For instance, today a person can check whether a piece of clothing is available at low price on an online platform or shopping from a branded store is economical. So a buyer is completely satisfied with his purchase which encourages him/her to do it more often as a hobby instead of a boring routine activity.
In conclusion, considering shopping as a hobby is a positive trend rather than an activity of daily routine in my opinion. The new advancements in shopping industries today has made it more enjoyable than ever.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...people shopping today is their favorite past time activity but, in the old days it was co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98069498069 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90378807972 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590733590734 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3977879163 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1428571429 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108930477967 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352894409294 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302185967208 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0700505402266 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314620149524 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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