Recently, the question of playing sports has been brought to the public attention. Some people advocate positive aspects of sports while others criticize the risk of this field. From my perspective, taking part in any games can bring both benefits and drawbacks.
Obviously, playing sports is one of the most effective ways to maintain a healthy lifestyle. Players can improve their physical endurance as well as mental strength by either practicing or playing on a regular basis. Consequently, people who are involved in playing sports can have better performance at both work or study. In addition, with regard to some talented participants, playing sports normally paves the way for a professional career. It could probably because these classes provide them a specialized environment to reach their peak performances.
However, people have to admit that players still encounter too many risks while playing sports. To be more specific, due to hectic schedule or overloaded exercises, injured bodies will limit contestants’ ability and they have a slim chance of doing well. In some circumstances, some serious injuries can lead to death or permanent wounds. Furthermore, regarding some particular sport such as skiing, team members must pay bills for equipment or club fees, which are sometimes out of their budget.
In conclusion, joining in any sports brings both merits and disadvantages. If people want to lessen the negative impacts and make full use of practising sports, they have to plan a suitable scheme.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, still, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 198.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38888888889 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94591677935 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.727272727273 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.304007802 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5454545455 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20892456704 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078931419071 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580701704679 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134128813398 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207163857016 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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