A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
give contact details for when you are away
give instructions about how to care for your pet
describe other household duties
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear .....................,
Dear Swapnil,
Thanks for agreeing to look after my house and my dog Bruno, as I am visiting my parents in India for ten days. While I am in India, you can contact me on my another number, that is 9932165487 if you come across any difficulties. Additionally, I am also leaving emergency contacts like neighbours, doctor, and freinds if in case I wont be available on phone when needed.
Bruno is the well-trained dog. In the morning you need to take him for walk; strolling in the garden will also do if you are not an early morning person. By 8.00 am, pour him a small bottle of milk kept in the refridgerator, alongwith with the dog food which is kept next to his small house. Before leaving for office, do not forget to tie him or else he will create a mess in the house. After coming from work, take him our for latrine alongwith laterine collector bag, otherwise he will do it in the backyard at night, which would be difficult to clean it.
Also do not forget to water the plants kept in the balcony every morning and turn off the water tap before going to bed. Neighbours are quite helpfull and will assist you if anythig required.
See you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Shreyas Parab
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47945205479 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4795403501 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630136986301 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0196718948 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.75 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197376447088 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726041180672 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052875476289 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996478864194 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394001474111 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.